So Robotic.

All those sound effects make me want to touch myself.
this is really good with the sound effects and everything, but, as I see as Robots being unleashed? I don't see that, I see this as more of a laid back Robot factory hang out spot.
You know, just a buncha robots bobbing their heads and acting all badass cause.. they're fuckin robots.
Only problem I see, and this is just constructive criticism, I think if there was more of a Beat and style to the song, it could come out a whole shit ton better, like, make it more... a song, not just a background kinda headbobbing beat with effects.
Just my opinion, but its awesome as it is.

Well...

Its better then Nyan Cat.
A lot better then Nyan Cat.
Should replace Nyan Cat.
Fuckin' Nyan Cat.
But I do love how this music is exactly the same, mp3 player version, BRILLIANT.
And I'm sure no matter how you go at it, putting an epic melody to this won't work.
After all, what porn music has melodies?
>:D

Was a good start.

Love the intro, it had that vibe of most Psytrance songs, it was dark, ominous, brooding, but as the song progressed I feel like the song went the wrong way, you had a more upbeat melodies with your dark and ominous melodies with the beat, it felt confusing.
I think you need to reconstruct some melodies to fit the dark ominous vibe you had going, as it is Psytrance, Psytrance is deep ominous melodies that get to your head, you had that in the beginning.
Don't wanna sound too negative, its a great start at Trying out Psytrance, I say keep at it!
-[TV]