All those sound effects make me want to touch myself.
this is really good with the sound effects and everything, but, as I see as Robots being unleashed? I don't see that, I see this as more of a laid back Robot factory hang out spot.
You know, just a buncha robots bobbing their heads and acting all badass cause.. they're fuckin robots.
Only problem I see, and this is just constructive criticism, I think if there was more of a Beat and style to the song, it could come out a whole shit ton better, like, make it more... a song, not just a background kinda headbobbing beat with effects.
Just my opinion, but its awesome as it is.
ic your views. pretty honest i must agree. very simple in the end. but it works out nicely. thanks for the review
Its better then Nyan Cat.
A lot better then Nyan Cat.
Should replace Nyan Cat.
Fuckin' Nyan Cat.
But I do love how this music is exactly the same, mp3 player version, BRILLIANT.
And I'm sure no matter how you go at it, putting an epic melody to this won't work.
After all, what porn music has melodies?
Was a good start.
Love the intro, it had that vibe of most Psytrance songs, it was dark, ominous, brooding, but as the song progressed I feel like the song went the wrong way, you had a more upbeat melodies with your dark and ominous melodies with the beat, it felt confusing.
I think you need to reconstruct some melodies to fit the dark ominous vibe you had going, as it is Psytrance, Psytrance is deep ominous melodies that get to your head, you had that in the beginning.
Don't wanna sound too negative, its a great start at Trying out Psytrance, I say keep at it!
Definitely some Potential
I would be interested in hearin the final product of this song, The beginning wasn't all that interesting, but I kept listening and that melody really carried me through the song, It makes the song a lot more moving, dramatic, puts more feeling into it, but I also feels like it needs a little bell sound or a pluck, or a harp, or a lead version of the two to put even more to it, backing it up.
Definitely love it.
Well I originally intended for the lead part to be female vox. But never got round to getting it recorded. The beginning is more for my benefit when mixing, I can set tempo easier. But thanks for feedback, definitely food for thought.
Its got Potential
The first 30 seconds were weird, but I should've expected weird due to the title hahaha
It was pretty different, but it fit in, whereas 0:30 to 0:45 felt... out of place in the song, if anything I think after that little intro, it beat should jump in where you had it at 0:45.
0:45+ I like a lot, thats the a little addicting part for me.
Keep working on this, I'd love to hear the Final product of this.
Its good.. but...
Its lacking somethings in my opinion, in my perspective.
The synths, strings, those whole notes sound too.. stern, they need a Blur effect to them, a Reveerb of sorts, like if it was being heard from the room next to yours.
The piano, or whatever those high notes are, made this track sound too.. carefree, light, optimistic. Space is.. mystical, ominous, infinite, You have a good feeling in this piece of music, but its not exactly exploring space, or looking at space. It feels more like it could be a Planet your looking at, FROM space, but not Space in general.
Sorry for the negativity haha, but its what these things are for, Its good, you have good feel on this, just needs some readjustment.
Just a Demo?
This is pretty well made, and I like this piece, Upbeat, hard kick, not so hard bass..
Well the bass could be pumped up, then I'd head bang to this quite a bit xD
It was a pretty ok song until about 55 seconds into the song, It started to get really good to my ears, So, yea, Good job ;D
Continue this, and work on it, I'd like to see it done.
-A lot of Dubstep out there isn't that good and I do appreciate more dance music xD
The Sun rose to this.
And it was the most epic 25 seconds of my life. Hahaha
For a Vocal track, this is really powerful and well done.
Not much to say really, can't say anything bad.. :P
Not too bad
Sounds pretty goo- Well, I mean, So far, it sounds pretty good, but with music like Metal, having Clear sounds is what its all about, Distortion guitars are hard to make clear, but You got something I like going here so far.
So cut back on Distortion and more EQ?
Alright, I'm starting to get the hang of it.
Thanks for your help!
"Space Station Sakura"
This piece sounds really nice, optimistic, Upbeat, carefree, its a nice feeling, and I really enjoyed it.
I can picture that this Space Station would be quite a place, a lot of people wanting to live there with this music.
However, the only problem I see (Aside this sounding more of an Ambient loop then Techno loop xD) is that- Well this is purely in my Perspective, But I usually picture Space station's, in a music form, as.. mysterious, ambient, futuristic, ominous, Like, your in space and your out there.. in the grand whole of space, its a lot to take in, shouldn't be carefree, like this damn good piece, again in my PoV.
This sounds a lot more like a... City, high in the sky, a flying city rather, I like it.
Thanks for rating1
You're right. I guess that's one of the reasons the rating on this loop is currently so low.
I know it's practically too late, but at least it will now be in an area that more fits it. I never thought it would be another ambient. But I guess that's what it would file under, aside from it having techno-like percussion, every once in a while.
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